tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post1410399575068262554..comments2023-10-22T03:16:31.189-06:00Comments on Recover Your Joy: You left. (a poem)Louise Gallagherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-69629821776415791702011-08-17T07:13:36.580-06:002011-08-17T07:13:36.580-06:00LG
knowing how well you write, usually, and knowi...LG<br /><br />knowing how well you write, usually, and knowing this issue for you it is clear this piece was written when the emotion was flowing. That emotion, as it spills on the page, draws the reader in. As a piece of writing - in terms of flow, diction and writing style, this is far from your best work ..... and maybe that is why it is so powerful, because putting it down was not about creating pretty prose.<br /><br />editing this piece will take it from good to ... fantastic, and when you do, it deserves to be published widely <br /><br />MarkAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-42328962560120514512011-08-17T04:07:25.052-06:002011-08-17T04:07:25.052-06:00It is a beautiful feat to live in the present with...It is a beautiful feat to live in the present with this past as a friend. To be able to tug on these threads and feel their meaning in you, and not be defeated by them now, is a triumph, a joy. You have written the whole post beautifully. I could see him clearly, wince in his presence. <br /><br />I lift my coffee mug to you in celebration of your freedom.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-47132559707945384892011-08-16T18:06:13.633-06:002011-08-16T18:06:13.633-06:00I love the connection between "a part" a...I love the connection between "a part" and "apart"Diane Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03379544317007203762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-39314345038660542372011-08-16T17:23:34.083-06:002011-08-16T17:23:34.083-06:00it feels like pulling thread apart. and yet, in t...it feels like pulling thread apart. and yet, in time we can look back and see that the yarn was used in the making of our tapestry.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-78328999917848022362011-08-16T16:58:26.589-06:002011-08-16T16:58:26.589-06:00An article of clothing tells a story. And it aches...An article of clothing tells a story. And it aches.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-42436623080259024472011-08-16T14:43:44.852-06:002011-08-16T14:43:44.852-06:00each thread until freedom is complete ...each thread until freedom is complete ...S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-37089594883858525522011-08-16T13:56:04.920-06:002011-08-16T13:56:04.920-06:00That's how we grieve sometimes, isn't it? ...That's how we grieve sometimes, isn't it? It is an unraveling. Beautiful, Louise.katdishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09210738418270395622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-7805354350942279692011-08-16T10:26:31.812-06:002011-08-16T10:26:31.812-06:00ugh - this is deep write, even more when reading t...ugh - this is deep write, even more when reading the background story...pulling the remnants apart, sometimes we have to..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-52915308619603125952011-08-16T07:55:23.871-06:002011-08-16T07:55:23.871-06:00Knowing your story, dear friend, this poem has dee...Knowing your story, dear friend, this poem has deep meaning. It's well written, its visual imagery strong, as is the feeling it conveys. What matters is you held on to the strongest thread and used it to reweave a narrative uniquely your own. Blessings.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com