tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post3763397633442225541..comments2023-10-22T03:16:31.189-06:00Comments on Recover Your Joy: Red rubber balls and other hauntingsLouise Gallagherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-64521536684990204222010-12-02T07:45:31.987-07:002010-12-02T07:45:31.987-07:00You capture the spirit of siblings so well; so muc...You capture the spirit of siblings so well; so much here. Reminds me of stories told about my mom and her brother, my uncle, who passed away this past summer.Diannehttp://polomecommunications.com/unfinishedworknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-83085176635456648002010-12-01T19:59:03.997-07:002010-12-01T19:59:03.997-07:00Thanks everyone for your comments -- and yes, it i...Thanks everyone for your comments -- and yes, it is nonfiction -- my brother was killed in a car accident 13 years ago -- and yes, when we were little he told me the round package under the tree was a bomb -- and I believed him!Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-39373088241001094762010-12-01T18:21:44.454-07:002010-12-01T18:21:44.454-07:00So intriguing. A mischievious brother who said it ...So intriguing. A mischievious brother who said it was a bomb, now only his spirit is present. Is this non-fiction? <br /><br />I like the flow of your poem. So many elements all wrapped in one.CMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15697762495151569561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-65556949749089853232010-11-29T10:32:38.050-07:002010-11-29T10:32:38.050-07:00"long lost on the road / from childhood / whe..."long lost on the road / from childhood / where one eyed-teddy bears / with sawdust hearts" makes me think of a sort of Island of Misfit Toys. What a call to peace and goodwill. Thanks for linking.David K Wheelerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07697049102440252195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-12462209937909396762010-11-28T10:49:06.426-07:002010-11-28T10:49:06.426-07:00unbeatable...
you write with care and love,
though...unbeatable...<br />you write with care and love,<br />thought provoking contribution...<br />way to go.<br /><br />Happy Sunday!<br /><br />don't forget to link some of your poems to potluck tonight,<br />Happy Sunday!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-47463829867384358282010-11-28T08:32:07.966-07:002010-11-28T08:32:07.966-07:00Yes, what Susan said.Yes, what Susan said.Sandra Heska Kinghttp://sandraheskaking.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-19921896953887810102010-11-27T21:27:28.546-07:002010-11-27T21:27:28.546-07:00This left me wondering many things ...This left me wondering many things ...S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-61988841964291426972010-11-27T10:25:47.320-07:002010-11-27T10:25:47.320-07:00"It was a red rubber ball"
I liked the ..."It was a red rubber ball"<br /><br />I liked the compactness of that image. So much unsaid that's said through the color, the texture, the shape and trajectory of a red rubber ball.L.L. Barkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13333960142447144678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2273998760028140856.post-26115583670518448312010-11-27T09:43:58.285-07:002010-11-27T09:43:58.285-07:00Great offering for the RAP, Louise.Great offering for the RAP, Louise.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com