Get Back
Cast in stone
your words
build walls so high
I huddle in the shadows
of the weighty matters
of your opinions
breaking
my back
every day workin'
workin' for the man
hunched
beneath the heaviness
of your glare
weighing me down
in this place
where you give advice
I cannot fathom
where you’re comin’ from
as I lose all sense of direction
and struggle to rise
above the weight
of your voice
telling me to
get up
get down
get over
whatever I have been
using to keep me from falling
down
where I split
a part
the futility of trying to get back
up holds me down and I cry
there ain’t no gettin’ up
from being down
so long
I can’t see beyond
the wall of sorrow
pinning me here
to this belief
there’s no up
side looking down on me
you remind me
of my limitations
holding me here
on this side of the street
where I will die
if I don’t get myself
straight
straight
I laugh
crooked teeth
black
with nicotine and neglect
I cough
and flem spills out
and you step
back
back to your side of the street
where I don’t scare you
as much
I know
I know
I scare you
but you don’t see me
hiding here
behind the wall of your opinions
holding me down
I gasp for air
but you don’t see me
hiding out in your opinions
building walls
cast in stone.
Get Back (A Poem) Audio Recording on Thursday night by Louiseg88
10 comments:
This is most empathetic and compassionate.
Thanks Kathleen.
I had no intention of writing a poem when I wrote it. It started with the words of a song I'd heard on the radio yesterday morning -- Cast in stone.
they stayed with me all day and then....
:)
Oh, how I love this ... not only your words but hearing your voice! Way cool.
there ain’t no gettin’ up
from being down
so long
I can’t see beyond
the wall of sorrow
pinning me here
to this belief... we sometimes have no idea how high the walls are and make them even higher....love your compassionate voice here louise
As I was reading this, I was thinking, she should record this one. And then I find you did!
I see this as the self's two-sided conversation. Nice sense of tension, the going toward and the pulling against.
amazing poem louise. i know that it is very real for you, its the sad reality of so many of us. being played with like puppets by people we love.
glad that you left that bleak torment far behind.
love and hugs.
your voice depicts the reality of your words ...
wow! good one.
are you on facebook?
i'm gonna post the link on our voices and friends group on facebook?
Thanks everyone for your encouragement!
And Nance -- I am on facebook -- Louise Gallagher
I can truly relate to every word...
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